A Bullet With My Name – “Ascension” Short Fiction Contest
There’s a great contest on at The Clarity Of Night…with cool prizes. Do check it out and join the fun!
This is my entry. First time I have written something in 250 words, haven’t been able to be too descriptive as I usually like to be.
The link to my entry
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A Bullet With My Name
The world passes me in a rush, the people around me a general blur. I run through the long corridors of the mall, taking every turn, hoping not to run into a dead end. I can hear Amrit panting behind me, her heels making it impossible for her to keep up. Ducking behind a rack, I ask her to take them off.
The two men following us run past. I have an idea.
I tear the tag off a jacket and put it on. I tell Amrit to wear a scarf and follow a few steps behind. Strolling casually, I walk out the exit, only to be stopped by a security guard.
Perfect.
I see Amrit walk out. The guard takes me to the security officer. He is easy. I grease him to let me off. Hoping Amrit might have escaped, I walk towards a security exit.
Then she screams.
I rush back inside, only to find the two men holding some girl hostage. I feel like a fish on a hook. They point their guns at me. I run for the stairs leading down to the basement. Petitioning God, I jump, shots whizzing past me.
They follow me down, when I see Amrit. Shocked to see her there, I tell her to run, but she walks towards me.
She walks towards me, puts a gun to my heart and pulls the trigger. Falling to the ground, the last thing I see are her feet, moving heavenward on an escalator.
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This entry was posted on January 10, 2009 at 4:05 pm and is filed under betrayal, Crime, Short Stories with tags Ascension contest, betrayal, clarity of night, deception. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.
January 11, 2009 at 11:25 am
as i tld you earlier, i so loved it
u write real thrillers!
happy to be here. take care.
January 15, 2009 at 5:27 pm
fuk… i had gooselfesh on that clincher…